Hi! I listened to he ad and I thought you sounded kind of flat. The substance was great, but the electorate is fired-up and wants someone who is fired up too. You need to convey more energy and passion, and potentially outrage about what's going-on in Washington.

Thanks!

You need to improve on your presentation.  Get fired up like we are. More passion in your voice is needed.  Show that you are as tired of Ms. Tsongas and her party line votes as the rest of us are! 

Have you seen her responses to any particular issue?  They must have been written by  democrat party insiders.  She never answers in simple understandable terms. It's always a long bloviated response defending her party line instead of what the people want! She must know what's best for all of us I guess. 

So, you should continue in your ads to tell her that the people are whom she represents and she hasn't been paying attention to the will of the people.

John Sarmanian

Haverhill, Ma.

I think you need to be more aggressive with the ad.  Open with something like you are as irritated as much as we are with the horrendous health care bill,  growth of big government,  illegal immigration, high unemployment, and overall tax increases.  The policies put in place by this administration will set us back for decades.  If elected your vote will be to get people back to work, repeal the health care bill, and address the illegal immigration and tax issues.  Hope that helps.

Yup, time to get TEA'd off, and sound it. But not too ticked, just respectfully miffed.

My wife and I are both giving you $55.00 each to get this ad out there.

This is a GOOD introductory ad. It is, hopefully the first in a series between now and September 14^th..

You have now introduced yourself to the radio listeners, your natural constituents! As per several studies, Radio talk show listeners are the most educated, most aware of the issues, etc. 

My thought would be run this intro piece, let people get to know you, then start to hit Tsongas on issues one at a time. She gives you plenty of ammo, Do Healthcare, her forcing us to have it and her staying on the Cadillac congressional plan, not having read the bill. Then Illegal’s. Then her vote to defund Afghanistan, WHILE OUR TROOPS ARE STILL THERE!  The bailouts that did not work, her voting 98.5% of the time with the “party elite”   You stronger ad’s will write themselves….

This is EXCELLENT! Civil, intelligent, succinct and effective. Refreshing change from the alternatives. Pure blood American. Too bad the family video can't be used, too.  Go Jon!

I agree with Bryan...  a good first add, but get into issues a bit more aggressively in next couple of adds.  Maybe a short check list that goes something like;

I do not support illegal immigrant amnesty, Niki Tsongas does.

I believe in cutting taxes and spending, Niki Tsongas does not.

etc, etc.

good Luck!

more about why you didn't vote.